Josh Seeley Unit 11

Page 1 At the very start of the opening scene, we are introduced to the detective, Barry, and his little family. Barry is portrayed as a family man who is kind and helpful when he needs to be. Page 2 Barry decides to go to the mall in his detective car. As he goes to park the hovering car, an old woman crashes into it, this makes Barry angry, showing his aggression, which is deep down in him. Page 3 Barry is still furious over what happened in the mall car park. He takes an air taxi to the police station. When he arrives there, he quickly rushes inside to the front desk and is greeted by a robot. He demands to speak to his boss. His boss then calls him through, they both discuss what happened. Barry demands a new car instantly, he won’t take no as an answer. Page 4 Without consent, Barry visits a car dealer. He is greeted by a salesman who shows Barry around the stock they have. However, Barry is really interested in a Camaro sitting in the corner ...

After a stubborn detective buys a new car, an alien invasion commences. Little did the detective know that the car had special powers, so they save the world together.

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